How many cars? Hundreds? Thousands? Electric, Hydrogen or gasoline? Are you suggesting drive-through offices? Or park-n-work offices? Who's playing what? Does the play change throughout the day / seasons / year? All of these questions should help you point our imaginations towards a projected future - your drawing is well positioned to super-charge itself with a host of new ideas for spatial occupations and demonstrations. With all of that said, I don't see the connection between your drawing and your working title yet - I don't see any edges being densified ("existing" or internally generated by your formal envelope), variable permeations or real conflict. So, work on both your title and your drawing to take it to the next level! Great start, though - I'm happy to see variable thickness in your section cut - what about permeating the skin-facets? Adding screens / scrims? What about targeting key "edges" within your model to cultivate new relationships between cars, office and play? Ideally, your final drawing won't rely upon generic labels, and would answer the question of what your title might ask...keep it rolling, great jump into the digital realm!
How many cars? Hundreds? Thousands? Electric, Hydrogen or gasoline? Are you suggesting drive-through offices? Or park-n-work offices? Who's playing what? Does the play change throughout the day / seasons / year? All of these questions should help you point our imaginations towards a projected future - your drawing is well positioned to super-charge itself with a host of new ideas for spatial occupations and demonstrations. With all of that said, I don't see the connection between your drawing and your working title yet - I don't see any edges being densified ("existing" or internally generated by your formal envelope), variable permeations or real conflict. So, work on both your title and your drawing to take it to the next level! Great start, though - I'm happy to see variable thickness in your section cut - what about permeating the skin-facets? Adding screens / scrims? What about targeting key "edges" within your model to cultivate new relationships between cars, office and play? Ideally, your final drawing won't rely upon generic labels, and would answer the question of what your title might ask...keep it rolling, great jump into the digital realm!
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